posted 22nd Feb 2015, 10:28 AM

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view Skweeee's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 10:51 AM


Hmmm? Why indeed.

view Sleeper's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 11:56 AM


I hope to leave you with more questions each scene.

Nice to see your familiar avatar again.

view ProfEtheric's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 11:31 AM


That's a really good question. You'd think that a figment would know these things.

view Sleeper's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 11:53 AM


I was wondering if anyone would catch that last week.

view Epiale's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 12:41 PM


Could it possibly be that the figments are not as they seem? Interesting point she brings up, kinda surprised I didn't notice that earlier.

Also very nice page. I like the fire effect you have going on the lighter in the second to last panel. :)

view Sleeper's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 1:38 PM


Very little is as it seems here. I'm looking forward to showing you next week's page.

Thanks! I'm doing a lot of experimentation with effects so it's nice to know when something works well and when it doesn't.

view Seabiscuit's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 2:14 PM


I'm gonna hold out hope for Marcus being legit real, dang it!
Dara is very cute here :D

view Sleeper's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 4:55 PM


Him not knowing her name is a point in favor of the "actually a talking Gila monster" camp.

...You might get another point next week too.

view Spelledeg's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 4:43 PM


That is odd that he doesn't know her name...I actually hadn't caught on to that. I had attributed it to a subconscious thing where maybe Dara wants to be called 'Sunshine' but...last page hmmm.

This page turned out really well! I dig your paneling and your figures keep getting better. Since this is approaching a seemingly 'slow' moment...I can only expect something a bit terrible is gonna happen really soon.

Chac's been away too long.(Or has he?)

view Sleeper's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 5:02 PM


Marcus has a certain fixation with the sunrise. He developed the ability to appreciate aesthetics shortly before witnessing one.

Thank you! I'm finding my groove with the whole comic making thing. Terrible things are a process. The worst ones start when we aren't looking.

Chac doesn't make a proper appearance again for quite some time. But if you keep a sharp eye, you might spot him in the prologue coming up after this scene. He may or may not appear from time to time as an Easter egg though.

view bejjinks's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 9:37 PM


I caught on. I knew Marcus was more than just a figment although I'm still not sure how much more. So what prize did I win.

view Sleeper's profile

22nd Feb 2015, 11:16 PM


Glad to hear it. A prize shows up in the next page.

view Stever's profile

23rd Feb 2015, 8:05 AM


She's gotten pretty handy at putting together a quick fire.

view Sleeper's profile

23rd Feb 2015, 10:04 AM


I debated having her get frustrated and light up a bush. But I figured I should just get on with the story

view Fig's profile

23rd Feb 2015, 3:14 PM


it's no fun if your mind knows EVERYTHING about you. lol. your art is getting much better, man. and i love how you always just kinda dangle something interesting at the end of each page.

view Sleeper's profile

23rd Feb 2015, 3:33 PM


Thanks man. I'm looking forward to finishing out this scene.

view zaika's profile

24th Feb 2015, 10:10 AM


I adore Marcus, but I think I'd adore him more if he was a real talking Gila monster...

view Sleeper's profile

24th Feb 2015, 2:51 PM


I'm really glad that everyone likes him so much. I didn't really see that coming.

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