On tangibility

posted 25th Jan 2015, 8:17 AM

On tangibility
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25th Jan 2015, 8:17 AM

Sleeper

It's first official sighting of the newly remodeled Dara and Marcus.

That last line came to me at the very last minute, as I was looking it over before posting. Doing this project on my own has really solidified the characters more than I had previously thought possible.

I'm trying not to plug my side project too often but I'm pretty excited about the current trailer on Tapir Trailer Park It's a gender bent western about a man trying to make it in the female dominated profession of gunslinger for hire. While you're there, check out the coming attractions tab to vote on which story I do next.

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25th Jan 2015, 8:20 AM

Seabiscuit

Haha, I love Marcus. I want to believe he actually exists, dangit!!
I really love the cracks on the ground here. They look so...Smooth and beautiful!

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25th Jan 2015, 9:50 AM

Sleeper

Marcus is a bold guesser but even he doesn't really know whether or not he's real.

Thanks! The ground was pretty easy after I found the right material in MS5.

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25th Jan 2015, 8:58 AM

ProfEtheric

Good, good, good! The banter here is great, and I like how you did the cracks in the ground.

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25th Jan 2015, 9:53 AM

Sleeper

Thanks! I'm eventually going to be playing with the ground more to see if I can't get some more depth to it but for now I'm pretty happy with it.

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25th Jan 2015, 11:12 AM

Skweeee

I'm with Prof. The way you have the conversation going is pure genius. I shall observe your writing skills and then try to improve on my own.

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25th Jan 2015, 11:16 AM

Sleeper

Thanks man! That means a lot to me.

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25th Jan 2015, 2:47 PM

chris-tar

I can just imagine how hot and dry it is, how dehydrated and thirsty, and delirious she must be, how every muscle must ache as the pain continues to increase, yet she is still compelled to move forward, forward to some unknown and unseen place as if not of her own volition, as if someone or something else is in control ...

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25th Jan 2015, 3:25 PM

Sleeper

Her situation is... unenviable to say the least.

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26th Jan 2015, 10:34 PM

Fig

seriously, man. you've hit fucking gold with Marcus, and it's great to see you understand how awesome he is and take advantage of your opportunities to use him. your skills as a writer are nothing short of incredible, man. keep up the stellar work! (also, i think this is one of your most artistically advanced pages. there's so much to like here, especially the pacing and the way the word balloons frame the characters)

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26th Jan 2015, 10:52 PM

Sleeper

Thanks dude! I was worried that people would be bored by this scene because it's mostly dialogue. But I'm hoping to raise some important questions in the coming pages.

I'm trying a lot of new stuff artistically. my best work seems to start with photo references.

Also, I've got the second house of Xibalba coming up tomorrow morning. So excited!

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