Bonk

posted 11th Jan 2015, 10:00 AM

Bonk
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11th Jan 2015, 10:00 AM

Sleeper

I went in a kinda weird direction with this one. I like to think I channeled Mel Brooks while doing this page. Had I channeled Max Brooks instead, the art would have come out much nicer.

This is the first page I tried to do with absolutely no outside references. While the body proportions are off in a lot of places, I feel like it's not a bad first try.


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11th Jan 2015, 11:41 AM

ProfEtheric

I love it. It comes across as much more "natural" feeling than your previous style. Keep at it, and it shall be AMAZING!

Another thing: kudos on equal-opportunity censorship. Drive a stake in the double-standard vampire! :)

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12th Jan 2015, 11:49 AM

Sleeper

Thanks! The equal opportunity censorship thing came to me during the censoring phase and I thought it was both funny and fair.

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11th Jan 2015, 12:29 PM

Seabiscuit

Haha, multi tasking like a pro!
(And that Bonk made me laugh)

Very nice, especially considering there was no references! Damn!

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12th Jan 2015, 11:51 AM

Sleeper

I've been wanting to "use" the panels more. at some point I'd like to do that thing where the action breaks the panel.

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11th Jan 2015, 12:35 PM

chris-tar

What a coincidence!
This very same thing happened with me once, only I ate a McDonald's Happy Meal off my girlfriend's back!

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12th Jan 2015, 7:33 PM

Sleeper

Every man is ultimately a slave to hunger.

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12th Jan 2015, 6:15 PM

Skweeee

Ha ha ha! I can't leave you for a month! I'm gone for a bit and open up your comic after being away for so long and am greeted with thhhh........!!!!!

Pretty good job with no reference, I must say. Going without reference can really free one up to get closer to what you have in mind composition-wise.

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12th Jan 2015, 7:38 PM

Sleeper

Haha! Yeah. I was a bit nervous about posting this one as well as the next one (in which I go low brow)

I think, after playing with styles more, I'm going to be working more from just laying out the skeletons over pictures and then tossing the pictures. That way I get a better sense of proportion without becoming too focused on getting things to match exactly.

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