Moving on

posted 31st Aug 2014, 8:30 AM

Moving on
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31st Aug 2014, 8:30 AM

Sleeper

I'm happy with this page. Overall the art isn't a huge step up but I found Teo's face. The nose has been right from the beginning but the eyes and mouth were lacking character. He looked too young and inexperienced. Teo is a hardened veteran of the jungle and I feel like his new face catches that. Of course it's on the last page of this section.

Very excited about scene two starting next week. That's where things start to take shape. Keep an eye out for a new character bio coming soon.

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31st Aug 2014, 10:24 AM

Skweeee

I like how Teo accessorizes with the animals he kills as he journeys through the forest.

Looking forward to finding out how this all raps together.

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31st Aug 2014, 10:56 AM

Sleeper

I hadn't thought about that. This one is more of a meat issue. The jaguar pelt has a deep significance to the Maya and Aztecs. It's one of two animals held in the highest regard for their ferocity. The second is the eagle.

The parallels between the two tales don't become painfully obvious for several more scenes.

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31st Aug 2014, 11:33 AM

VulturesUnderTheMoon

Yay snake stake for dinner!!!!!!

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31st Aug 2014, 3:00 PM

Sleeper

Tastes like chicken!

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31st Aug 2014, 2:46 PM

Proxy170

He's got quite a collection going!

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31st Aug 2014, 3:01 PM

Sleeper

I wonder if he'll have time to make a pair of boots.

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31st Aug 2014, 7:56 PM

Stever

I'm sure he's pretty happy with snake cuisine ;D

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31st Aug 2014, 9:38 PM

Sleeper

Slow roasted with a little bit of chili powder.

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