Heading out

posted 8th Jun 2014, 10:08 AM

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8th Jun 2014, 10:08 AM

Sleeper

I really didn't want to wait until tonight. This is the first page I did and the fourth thing I've drawn in the last ten plus years. The art will get better. Trust me.

Also, don't expect any dialogue in Teo's scenes.

I'll put up a character bio page as soon as I figure out how to set one up.

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10th Jun 2014, 9:56 AM

Sleeper

You may have noticed I have a Character bio tab now. So far only Teo is up there. I'll add more bios as the other characters make their entrances. I strongly discourage you from reading them as I feel like the introduction you get with the story is ideal to understanding them. The option is there because I see that people like reading character bios early on.


I really don't like the look of it and I know next to nothing about website design. I'll see what I can do about making it easier on the eyes and I'd appreciate any sort of help in terms of getting a background image and changing the white text background to a different color.

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8th Jun 2014, 11:35 AM

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8th Jun 2014, 8:51 PM

Sleeper

Thanks for stopping by.

10th Jun 2014, 2:22 PM

princessmira

im already impressed with the art :)

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10th Jun 2014, 2:47 PM

Sleeper

Thanks Mira!

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22nd Oct 2014, 1:05 PM

40.oz

Niiice. Diggin' the muted color palette. My only gripe with this page is panel 4. He's headed to the right leading the reader's eye off the page. It would be better if you had him going left to lead the reader's eye to panel 5. But it's not a biggie. The page kills.

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22nd Oct 2014, 5:07 PM

Sleeper

Thanks! Yeah, this whole process has been a big learning experience for me.

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