Moving along

posted 16th May 2014, 7:52 AM

Moving along
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view Sleeper's profile

16th Aug 2015, 7:52 AM


Overall, I'm not super thrilled with this page. But I did learn a few things in the course of it so that's good. Plus I do like how Nesariel came out.

Nesariel appears courtesy of ProfEtheric (of course). Keep your eyes peeled for the reboot of Autumn Bay coming soon.

That's it for the prologue y'all. Next week I'll be moving this to the beginning and we'll go back a few centuries to see what Teo's up to. If you don't feel like waiting that long, drop me a vote on TWC to see next week's page.

This is the scene where I begin to earn my violence flag. Get ready to see the mesoamerican murder machine in action. Can you tell I'm excited? Cause I am.

I'm posting from the past so I can't say anything about club cosplay. Check me out on the Instagram if you want to see pics from a two night cosplay event. I'm @dendrobite

view Skweeee's profile

16th Aug 2015, 8:14 AM


Aww man!! I wanted to see the foam machine action.

Oh well.

Very good colouring in the top first panel.

view Sleeper's profile

19th Aug 2015, 3:29 PM


Thanks Skweeee! I've been trying a few new things with the colors. Glad it's paying off. I'm excited about the next update.

view ProfEtheric's profile

16th Aug 2015, 8:55 AM


I, for one, think the page is fine. :)

It's going to be neat seeing Teo in action again. Looking forward to it!

view Sleeper's profile

19th Aug 2015, 3:29 PM


Thanks Prof!

Me too!

view chris-tar's profile

16th Aug 2015, 10:42 AM


Great update, the psychedelic color scheme is really cool. One crit though, could you make Dara's head about twice as big? She would look much more proportionate then.
Thanks for the update!

view Sleeper's profile

19th Aug 2015, 3:31 PM


I appreciate your candor good sir.

I really need to go back and do that. Proportions are really hit and miss when I go freehand.

view Jarvi's profile

17th Aug 2015, 10:04 AM


I guess that's how she ends up in the middle of the desert?

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19th Aug 2015, 3:32 PM


You guessed correctly.

view Outlaw's profile

17th Aug 2015, 10:36 AM


Who doesn't love a good foam machine? lol

Excellent page, my friend.

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19th Aug 2015, 3:33 PM


I've never seen one of those things in action, but they look incredible.


view Miaubol's profile

17th Aug 2015, 12:02 PM


Foam machine.. This the part where I shall say 'Oh no' ..right?


I guess it is.. D:

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19th Aug 2015, 3:33 PM


Chuck laughs and someone somewhere cries.

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20th Aug 2015, 7:27 AM


It's totally fine! I stand by that ;)
Nessie liking the foam machine, yup, sounds like him hahah

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21st Aug 2015, 9:32 PM


Thanks Sea. You're a generous critic of art.

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