Party's over

posted 15th May 2014, 7:32 AM

Party's over
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9th Aug 2015, 7:32 AM

Sleeper

I'm really happy with the way this page came out. Again, big thanks to Teslaverien for helping me out on this one. She just rebooted her comic Defenestration.

In utterly unrelated news, I've got a new short story I've been working on. If I play my cards right it'll update daily for about a month before wrapping up. It's a totally SFW tale of romance.

Don't forget, you can see next week's page by clicking on the TWC banner below the comments section and voting on Xibalba. No account necessary.

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9th Aug 2015, 8:23 AM

chris-tar

Well, you know how it is. If a high school coach says you are a loser, then you definitely have no future what so ever. Yup. Their opinion sums up all of your total lifetime talents, abilities and potential. If they say you can't do it, then that is the end of the argument. Period. Just give up right then and there because it is over. Lol

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9th Aug 2015, 8:43 AM

Sleeper

Funny how when you're a kid you think these people know what they're doing or what they're talking about.

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9th Aug 2015, 9:30 AM

chris-tar

I think the true purpose of most educators and coaches is to condition children to OBEY the system and crush creative thought.

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9th Aug 2015, 9:04 AM

ProfEtheric

Wowowow...

I finally got caught up again... one heck of a trip, man...

Glad to see you back in the saddle!

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9th Aug 2015, 4:42 PM

Sleeper

It's good to be back in the saddle.

I'm so glad I ended up doing this prologue. One more page before jumping back to Teo.

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9th Aug 2015, 10:45 AM

lirvilas

That's a nicely done page. Postures, dialogue, the subtle touch of the cracked desert soil...

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9th Aug 2015, 4:42 PM

Sleeper

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9th Aug 2015, 1:43 PM

sigpig

I know that you changed your drawing style a while ago, but didn't Dara look, I don't know, "prettier" in your earlier pages? Is it because you are trying to make her look closer to the Mayan carvings?

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9th Aug 2015, 4:43 PM

Sleeper

No... It's more because I haven't settled into consistent art yet. I didn't like her original pointy nose and chin so I've been doing a lot of experimentation.

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9th Aug 2015, 2:31 PM

Dongaria

Your art has gotten so good. Do yourself a favor and look at the first few pages then this page. Great work!

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9th Aug 2015, 4:49 PM

Sleeper

Thanks! Sometimes I wonder what percentage of my readers are just in it to watch me progress.

When I get to your level I won't have to worry about getting better. Just faster.



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9th Aug 2015, 5:01 PM

Dongaria

You've got a great story but it's even better served by the increasingly good art. These things aren't independent of each other. Thanks for the compliment on my art, I'm actually in the process of trying to up my own art game! This place is a gym for story quads and art pectorals. ;)

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9th Aug 2015, 6:04 PM

NeilKapit

Hallucinatory or not, this coach is a terrible teacher, a perfect example of the kind of teacher who takes out their own frustrations on their students, and deludes themselves into thinking it's for their own good.

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9th Aug 2015, 7:22 PM

Sleeper

You hit the nail on the head with that one. The hallucination is actually spot on for the coach. She thinks putting her students down is the best way to get results. She has a special place in her heart for Dara.

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10th Aug 2015, 1:50 AM

Miaubol

but.. but.. what's wrong with a little partying ..?

not very encouraging, that coach D:

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10th Aug 2015, 10:53 PM

Sleeper

Brockburn is all stick, no carrot.

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10th Aug 2015, 7:17 AM

Seabiscuit

Awwww yeah, dem eyes :D
Dat desert ground

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10th Aug 2015, 10:54 PM

Sleeper

I figured out a new eye glow technique for this page that I'll be using again the next time we get back to Dara.

Thx!

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