Taking a knee

posted 18th Dec 2016, 10:21 AM

Taking a knee
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18th Dec 2016, 10:21 AM

Sleeper

Things are not looking good for our friend Teo.

I know I keep saying this, but, next week should be the last page in this scene. Sorry if this one dragged on too long.

As always, thank you for reading. You make it easier for me to keep on going. I may never be able to fully express how much it means to me.

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18th Dec 2016, 11:23 AM

Skweeee

Holy crap! Teo might be going down, but he's going down fighting. He's being a total badass on this page!

I like how you are running this action on.

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18th Dec 2016, 12:20 PM

Sleeper

Thanks man! I appreciate that.

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18th Dec 2016, 12:30 PM

MadJak91

Do you even have a chance once the poison is inside you like that? Neck of all areas...
Considering the poison frogs are very deadly in reality as well.
Hm.

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19th Dec 2016, 10:02 AM

Sleeper

Regular person and a regular frog? Chances would be slim without immediate medical attention.

Teo is not a regular person and Chac is not a regular frog. So it's up in the air for now.

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18th Dec 2016, 1:53 PM

Chippewa Ghost

This is like the end of Kurosawa's Ran... substitute darts for arrows...

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19th Dec 2016, 10:02 AM

Sleeper

Thanks you SO much!

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18th Dec 2016, 8:20 PM

Seabiscuit

Awww no, TEO!!! D:

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19th Dec 2016, 10:03 AM

Sleeper

I did say it would go poorly for him.

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19th Dec 2016, 10:51 AM

chris-tar

There is no way you could pack too many scenes in the epic final battle of Teo's life!
And, he finally got that little weasel up in the tree!
Snipers are cowards!

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19th Dec 2016, 2:21 PM

Sleeper

That's a relief to hear. Some day I'd like to go back and stuff in a little more for fun.

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